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Constitution of Hyperion for Review

Xyrgistan

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on: April 19, 2021, 03:26:06 pm
https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1533147

Is this all I have to do? Please let me know if I have to do anything else.
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Reply #1 on: April 19, 2021, 03:50:00 pm
This territorial constitution does not comply with federal law due to the following:

Section I: All the nations in Hyperion which have registered with the Prefect are citizens
The Constitution already outlines citizenship requirements and this violates them

Section III: All Citizens are entitled to the rights outlined in the following Bill
The items listed underneath this are not part of a bill

Section IV: The rights granted to citizens may be temporarily suspended as punishment for Constitutional Offenses or if the Governor deems it necessary for the good of Hyperion as a whole
Rights granted to citizens by the federal Constitution may not be suspended by anyone other than the Court

Bills may not contradict the Union Constitution, the Provincial Constitution, or Provincial Orders
This does not include the other forms of law that supersede territorial declarations

The Assembly may hold a remove a Consul from office with no penalty with a majority no confidence vote if it deems their policies are not representative of the citizens' desires
Fix this

Section III: The Judicial Branch: as a Province of the Union of Force, Hyperion may not have a legal system. Disputes among citizens and legal offenses will be determined in the High Court of the Union and punishments will be decided by the Governor
The governor is not empowered to assign punishments

Section III: The Governor or the Founder of the Union may veto amendments if they determine the consequences of the passage of the amendment would be detrimental to Hyperion or if the amendment contradicts the Union Constitution
The Court can also strike down the territorial constitution if it violates any of the higher-tier ordinances
You are now breathing manually


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Reply #2 on: April 19, 2021, 07:03:39 pm
Ok, I will fix all of the legal issues ASAP. Thanks for getting back to me so quickly.
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Lord Speaker of The New Kingdom
Deputy Director of Internal Affairs of the Citizens' Alliance of Democracy
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Reply #3 on: April 19, 2021, 07:18:05 pm
Ok, I am fairly certain I fixed all the problems you found. Is the updated Constitution legal now? Thanks
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World Assembly Delegate for Heart
Governor of Hyperion
Lord Speaker of The New Kingdom
Deputy Director of Internal Affairs of the Citizens' Alliance of Democracy
Director of World Assembly Affairs for the Union
Federal House Representative for the Union-at-Large
Ambassador for the Union





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Reply #4 on: April 20, 2021, 07:50:58 pm
The correct procedure is to wait for all Justices to post their reviews.

You may not edit a document after it is posted for review, please post it in PDF form.


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Reply #5 on: April 20, 2021, 07:57:00 pm
This territorial constitution does not comply with federal law due to the following:

Section I: All the nations in Hyperion which have registered with the Prefect are citizens
The Constitution already outlines citizenship requirements and this violates them

Section III: All Citizens are entitled to the rights outlined in the following Bill
The items listed underneath this are not part of a bill

Section IV: The rights granted to citizens may be temporarily suspended as punishment for Constitutional Offenses or if the Governor deems it necessary for the good of Hyperion as a whole
Rights granted to citizens by the federal Constitution may not be suspended by anyone other than the Court

Bills may not contradict the Union Constitution, the Provincial Constitution, or Provincial Orders
This does not include the other forms of law that supersede territorial declarations

The Assembly may hold a remove a Consul from office with no penalty with a majority no confidence vote if it deems their policies are not representative of the citizens' desires
Fix this

Section III: The Judicial Branch: as a Province of the Union of Force, Hyperion may not have a legal system. Disputes among citizens and legal offenses will be determined in the High Court of the Union and punishments will be decided by the Governor
The governor is not empowered to assign punishments

Section III: The Governor or the Founder of the Union may veto amendments if they determine the consequences of the passage of the amendment would be detrimental to Hyperion or if the amendment contradicts the Union Constitution
The Court can also strike down the territorial constitution if it violates any of the higher-tier ordinances



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Reply #6 on: April 20, 2021, 08:01:01 pm
This is unconstitutional because of the following:

Section I: All the nations in Hyperion which have registered with the Prefect are citizens
The Constitution already outlines citizenship requirements and this violates them

Section III: All Citizens are entitled to the rights outlined in the following Bill
The items listed underneath this are not part of a bill

Section IV: The rights granted to citizens may be temporarily suspended as punishment for Constitutional Offenses or if the Governor deems it necessary for the good of Hyperion as a whole
Rights granted to citizens by the federal Constitution may not be suspended by anyone other than the Court

Bills may not contradict the Union Constitution, the Provincial Constitution, or Provincial Orders
This does not include the other forms of law that supersede territorial declarations

The Assembly may hold a remove a Consul from office with no penalty with a majority no confidence vote if it deems their policies are not representative of the citizens' desires
Fix this

Section III: The Judicial Branch: as a Province of the Union of Force, Hyperion may not have a legal system. Disputes among citizens and legal offenses will be determined in the High Court of the Union and punishments will be decided by the Governor
The governor is not empowered to assign punishments

Section III: The Governor or the Founder of the Union may veto amendments if they determine the consequences of the passage of the amendment would be detrimental to Hyperion or if the amendment contradicts the Union Constitution
The Court can also strike down the territorial constitution if it violates any of the higher-tier ordinances
Alright. It is time.


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Reply #7 on: April 20, 2021, 08:04:42 pm
This territorial constitution does not comply with federal law due to the following:

Section I: All the nations in Hyperion which have registered with the Prefect are citizens

The Constitution already outlines citizenship requirements and this violates them. Please change this.

Section III: All Citizens are entitled to the rights outlined in the following Bill
The items listed underneath this are not part of a bill, nor have anything to do with one. Please change this.

Section IV: The rights granted to citizens may be temporarily suspended as punishment for Constitutional Offenses or if the Governor deems it necessary for the good of Hyperion as a whole
Rights granted to citizens by the federal Constitution may not be suspended by anyone other than the Court

Bills may not contradict the Union Constitution, the Provincial Constitution, or Provincial Orders.

This does not include the other forms of law that supersede territorial declarations.

Section III: The Judicial Branch: as a Province of the Union of Force, Hyperion may not have a legal system. Disputes among citizens and legal offenses will be determined in the High Court of the Union and punishments will be decided by the Governor

The governor does not have the power to assign punishments.

Section III: The Governor or the Founder of the Union may veto amendments if they determine the consequences of the passage of the amendment would be detrimental to Hyperion or if the amendment contradicts the Union Constitution

The Court also has the power to strike down the territorial constitution if it violates any of the higher-tier ordinances. Take note.