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Request For Review: Prudentia Constitution

Offline Gumeus

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on: May 14, 2022, 02:58:27 pm
As the anax of Prudentia, i request a review for Prudentia Constitution.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KSrFZgDvFkbEaIP8_Fy-8_r0ymjUyRPIPo5hVSsbXno/edit
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Reply #1 on: May 14, 2022, 09:32:53 pm

The High Court has determined that your proposed constitution is consistent with Union law. However, we have located a factual error:

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Constitution of the Province of Prudentia

Preamble:
The Province of Prudentia shall be a democracy within the Union of Force, whose aims are to promote freedom, liberty, community, and peace.

As this is your proposed constitution for statehood, the term "Province" should be replaced with "State"
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Reply #2 on: May 16, 2022, 03:51:01 pm

The High Court has determined that your proposed constitution is consistent with Union law. However, we have located a factual error:

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Constitution of the Province of Prudentia

Preamble:
The Province of Prudentia shall be a democracy within the Union of Force, whose aims are to promote freedom, liberty, community, and peace.

As this is your proposed constitution for statehood, the term "Province" should be replaced with "State"

Updated version of the Constitution of Prudentia

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9aJhN_IK37LIcCRTmvPKKZIsVNYvfQjcnXZHN1tTuw/edit
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